Gabriel the Mercinary Pencil :D
this is nice. My main concern is that the legs should be a bit longer. The typical rule for legs is that they are about 4 heads high. 2 from the hip to the knee, and 2 from the knee to the heel. Dont be afraid of the drawing flowing off the paper, it happens. Good job with the hands and torso though, they look really good.
That said, I believe you have inspired me to go out and draw my Oblivion character. :D